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After school, Hanamichi and the other five members of the “Comedy 5” had come to a supermarket near his house to accompany him shopping.
“Ooooh ! ! !”
“……Again?”
“Are you that excited at the supermarket?”
Wakita and Fujii chuckled as they watched the scene before them.
Hanamichi, holding a basket, was incessantly dumping in frozen foods and cup ramen one after the other. And every time he put them in, he would make an exaggerated yell.
“Uwooooooo ! ! This is cheap ! ! Okay, I’ll buy it ! !”
Bang !
“Ooooh ! This cup ramen is 50 yen off ! I’ve got to buy it !”
Bang ! !
“Oh oh oh ! This is a limited time offer frozen fried rice ! ! Okay, I’ll buy two ! !
Bang ! Bang ! !
“No, no, no, you put too much in ! !”
“I mean, you’re talking too loud ! You’re bothering people in the store ! !”
Yasui and Fujii immediately retorted.
“Ahaha ! ! No~, this is not good ! !”
Wakita laughed out loud and asked Tsumugi next to him for agreement, [Hey, don’t you think so too, Mikami?]
–But.
“…….”
Tsumugi was not laughing at all, which was unusual.
On the contrary, her expression was completely serious.
“You can’t do that, Morita kun !”
Saying so, Tsumugi grabbed Hanamichi’s arm and stopped him.
“Eh?”
Hanamichi makes a surprised face.
She had been laughing out loud no matter what kind of joke he made, but this was the first time he saw a serious expression on her face.
“Mikami san, don’t you know?”
Wakita looked as if he had guessed.
“I don’t know…..what?”
When Tsumugi looked at Wakita curiously, Fujii answered a little awkwardly.
“……Morita lives alone.”
“Eh?”
Tsumugi widened her eyes.
“His parents are overseas, right?”
Yasui said as if to confirm, and Hanamichi shrugged lightly.
“Yeah,. Both my parents are overseas on business. I’ve been like this since junior high school.”
Hanamichi said it casually, but Tsumugi stared at him as if shocked.
“……That’s not good !”
Tsumugi forcefully snatched Hanamichi’s shopping cart away from him.
“Oh, hey !?”
Hanamichi panicked, but Tsumugi did not show any mercy.
“You can’t eat all this instant food…..! You have to eat something good for your body ! If you keep eating this kind of food, you’ll destroy your body !”
Tsumugi said with a serious look in his eyes and began to put the frozen foods and cup noodles in the basket back where they belonged one after another.
“Oh, come on !? They were so cheap ! !”
Hanamichi resisted, but Tsumugi was very quick and the frozen foods and the cup noodles were put back on the shelves one after another.
“What’s not good is not good !”
Tsumugi said this so confidently, just like a mother.
“……Hey, hey, it’s rare to see Mikami san being this serious.”
“No, it’s kinda fresh.”
Wakita and Fujii muttered in admiration.
“By the way, living almost alone is amazing, when you think about it calmly.”
“Yeah. I don’t think I’m at a level where I can live alone though.”
While Yasui and Fujii were quietly chatting away, Tsumugi walked briskly ahead of the group.
“I’ll decide what to buy for you !”
“Eh?”
Before Hanamichi could even be surprised, Tsumugi was heading briskly toward the fruits and vegetables section.
“You’ve got to get your veggies right !”
“Wait, you……!”
While Hanamichi was puzzled by Tsumugi’s sudden action, Wakita, Fujii, and Yasui were smiling as they watched the scene.
“…..I’m sure this will improve Morita’s eating habits a bit, right?”
“Indeed. At least it’ll be better than living on cup noodles.”
“Mikami san, you’re pretty good……”
The three giggled as they looked at each other.
Thus, Hanamichi’s shopping was forced to shift to the ‘health improvement plan’ by Tsumugi, which was not supposed to happen.
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Ok so I read all of this until now and have alot to say.
First up the beginning fails, we dont know anything about mc, his ex or why any of the ntr happened.
Infact you can literally remove the ntr from this story and nothing changes. We see no reaction or thought process to what MC thought of the ntr, what his ex thought or now thinks.
Heck we dont even know WHY douche is so insistent on broadcasting cucking the mc outside he finds him annoying (and lets be honest the MCs humor is child level and sounds exhausting to be around).
Secondly the FMC laughs at literally anything, I feel like MC could accidently stub a toe and break his foot and shes laugh hysterically with tears in her eyes.
I feel the author is really bad at jokes hence the absolutely 8yr old level humor here as a writer cannot write beyond their means. Whats weirder is all the interactions between the 5 friends is also at a 8yr old level but they are supposed to be 16-18.
I also don’t understand how douche is top caste when he broadcasts being a ntr scumbag and somehow the ex hasnt been publically executed socially for cheating while the MC is apparently the funniest guy ever that makes everyone laugh but isnt a top caste person?
Most of this has been rinse and repeat and suddenly in the last few chapters author realises we’ve had zero character let alone development and throws out fmc has a bad home life and school sucks for her while mc is a loner (hence the school clown for attention).
This really needs peoples thoughts to be written in and more importantly actually address and expand on the actual titles premise cause as of right now this is just your stock romcom with a fake ntr tag.